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"Wild" I wrote,
in a line to another
but such a word
means the world when I wonder,
when I let my thoughts wander,
to a clearing in my mind,
where anyone might find
a field within a forest,
whose shady canopy provides,
an irresistible tug
like the moon's pull on the tides...

And I think of circles and spirals,
And rings and many things
Of sea-breezes and sun-showers,
Or circlets and wildflowers,
Of thoughts left unwritten,
And a smooth, grey kitten,
curled at the base of a tree...

And a cloak
And a dagger
And long flowing sleeves
And wide-eyed she smiled
While I wrote of "wild"...
And I sit in this place- in this world, where I wonder
Where I let my thoughts wander
And I ponder these things
And I miss you
I miss you
while I write
of things that are wild
in a line to another.
©2009 ~Arhain
:iconarhain:

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:bulletblue:Blue Sapphires for September:bulletblue:

I'm not 100% with this, but,
who ever is with their own writing?
Comments wanted.

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:iconx13th-floorx:
Amazing poem.
The images portrayed and visualized in this piece were surreal and very vivid.
Excellent flow as well.

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"Humor is almost always anger with its make up on."

- Stephen King (Bag of Bones)
:iconarhain:
Thanks,
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

--
Oh, thou salty libertine,
Shed not thine tears of pale marine,
Upon my rusted moon-machine.
:iconx13th-floorx:
Not a problem.
:]

--

"Humor is almost always anger with its make up on."

- Stephen King (Bag of Bones)
:iconjinxed-but-lucky:
Niiiiiiiiiceee

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Call me Kitty, and I'll kill you...
:iconarhain:
(: Thanks~!

--
Oh, thou salty libertine,
Shed not thine tears of pale marine,
Upon my rusted moon-machine.

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